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Jacob - Chapter 1Oh take this veil from off my eyes,My burning sun will someday rise- Summertime, SublimeSummer time and the livin's easy.What utter bullshit.No really, complete bullshit.I mean, how can you live in the world we do and still believe the living is easy anywhere? I don't want to sound like a whiny bitch, but some of us have it even less easy than others. Whoever said the living was easy did not live in the same world I do. They probably never had a shitty job. They never had to live through a summer in the fucking valley. And they definitely didn't grow up gay. Believe me, summer time and the living was not easy.I don't want to turn this into a pity party for me. So I'm not going to dwell too much on how unfair of a life I had growing up. Which to be honest really didn't get to be unfair until I hit High School. Since I'm starting at the beginning, my mind just thought of those lyrics; I figured going back to that summer when it all began would be best. I'll start before all the hi